Question

【题目】人们对待机遇有不同的态度，请以“Opportunities favour the prepared mind”为题，按要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章，要点如下：

对待机遇的态度	结果	你的观点
梦想着成功，却迟迟没有行动，等着天上掉馅饼	只能看着机遇从身边悄悄溜走	（请举例说明）
默默努力着，为机遇的到来做好充分准备	最终迎来成功的喜悦

注意：1.可参照以上内容适当发挥；

2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

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Answer 1

【答案】Opportunities favour the prepared mind

There are two kinds of people taking completely different attitudes to building a bright future.One is dreaming of opportunities for a promising future,but without any action,while the other devotes himself earnestly to his work to get fully prepared.

The message conveyed above is crystal clear: Opportunities favour the prepared mind.The difference between the two lies only in the way each treats opportunities.Successful people always make adequate preparations to seize opportunities.Unsuccessful people,on the other hand,work little and just wait,seeing them pass by.

To further highlight the importance of our attitude towards opportunities,let’s take the Chinese diver Wu Minxia for example.In order to win the gold medal in the Olympics,she trained hard day after day and eventually made it. Therefore,we should make efforts to make our dreams come true.It’s universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts.(152)

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，文章要点已经给出，在写这篇文章时要注意以下几点：

1.整篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。

2.要点要齐全，但是不要进行简单的罗列，可以采用适当的连接词，或者是表递进关系的副词如therefore使上下文衔接自然，行文自然流畅。

3.注意语气，此文是写给自己的英语短文，所以语气上应该比较平和，不应该出现过多的强硬语气的词语。

4. 注意文章要以一定的逻辑顺序进行叙述，一定要把各方观点叙述清楚，细节把控要到位。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】

提纲性文章难点：提纲性文章难点：扩充成句，因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出，在将短句扩充时，要精炼。其中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达，如强调句，定语从句等，就如文中It’s universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts. 使用的是定语从句。再者就是要多使用一些高级词汇与词组，如be dreaming of，devote to， make preparations to， pass by，In order to ， make efforts to等。最后就是要段落清新，层次分明。就像文中要多使用一些连接词语使衔接自然。