Question

【题目】假如你是李华。某英文报社正在举行主题未“周日关闭智能手机”的活动，你很感兴趣。请你用英文给此报社发一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.表明愿意参加活动，并给出原因；

2.关闭手机后，你准备在本周日安排哪些活动；

3.表示会向同学们介绍此项活动。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am pleased to learn about your appeal to spend a Sunday without using smartphones._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam:

I am pleased to learn about your appeal to spend a Sunday without using smartphones. I’m very glad to join in the activity. Smartphones are playing an important role nowadays, making it easier for us to communicate with others and deal with work. But at the same time, we seem to be losing the skills of the face-to-face comminication.

I will present my plans for this Sunday here. After getting up, I would like to invite my friends to go for a mrning run in the park. At noon, it is a good idea to help my parents prepare a big meal, after which my family will spend the whole afternoon enjoying the lates movie together. In the evening, we will stay at home, reading books.

It is really a meaningful activity, so I am eager to recommend it to my classmates.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】首先审题，这篇文章要求假如你是李华。某英文报社正在举行主题未“周日关闭智能手机”的活动，你很感兴趣。请你用英文给此报社发一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表明愿意参加活动，并给出原因；2.关闭手机后，你准备在本周日安排哪些活动；3.表示会向同学们介绍此项活动。其次选用正确的人称和时态，用一般将时、第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句At noon, it is a good idea to help my parents prepare a big meal, after which my family will spend the whole afternoon enjoying the lates movie together.