Question

【题目】假定你是李华。你是学生会主席。你校将于5月25—30日在广州沙面举行龙舟赛 (Dragon Boat Race)。请根据以下内容给姐妹学校剑桥中学（Cambridge High School)写一封邀请信。

(1)写信目的

(2)活动时间、地点和意义

(3)回复时间：2017年4月15日前

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, president of our Students’ Union. I am much honored to inform you of the exciting news that a Dragon Boat Race will be organized by our school. On behalf of our school, I am writing to invite all your faculty and students to be the participants and audience of this activity.

The Dragon Boat Race, in memory of the great poet, Qu yuan, will be held in Shamian, Guangzhou, from May 25th to 30th. Not only will it enrich our campus life but also greatly motivate our passion for Chinese culture. Additionally, it’s a precious opportunity to promote the interaction / friendship between the two schools.

I would appreciate it if you could be our distinguished guest of this activity. And hopefully, we can receive your reply by April 15th, 2017.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇邀请信，要点已给出，根据要点文章可分三段来写，第一段表明写信目的；第二段说明该活动的时间、地点和意义；第三段说明回复截止时间。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态，本文要以一般现在时和将来时为主；上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】

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