Question

【题目】你班将于下周五下午3:30举行主题为“感谢师恩，暖心行动”（Heartfelt Thanks, Warm Action）的班会活动。假如你是班长李华，请告知交换生Jack活动事项并请他提前作好准备。

活动事项包括：

1. 分享一件为老师做过的暖心之事；

2. 交流听后启发和感受；

3. 赠送感谢卡。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

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Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

In order to show gratitude to our teachers, a class meeting themed“Heartfelt Thanks, Warm Action” is to be held in the classroom at 3:30 pm next Friday. The activities are scheduled as follows.

First, we will share our experiences of doing something kind and touching for our teachers. Then, we will exchange our feelings and thoughts inspired by the stories. Finally, the class meeting will come to an end in the presentation of thank-you cards to the teachers.

Please get prepared and attend it on time.

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题，你班将于下周五下午3:30举行主题为“感谢师恩，暖心行动”（Heartfelt Thanks, Warm Action）的班会活动。假如你是班长李华，请告知交换生Jack活动事项并请他提前作好准备。活动事项包括：1. 分享一件为老师做过的暖心之事；2. 交流听后启发和感受；3. 赠送感谢卡。其次要确定时态，表示将要发生的事情，所以这篇文章要使用一般将来时。然后要确定文章的结构，按照题目所给内容逐条翻译即可。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在80左右。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。Then, we will exchange our feelings and thoughts inspired by the stories.这里含有一个过去分词作定语结构。