Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
The environment pollution is more and more seriously today. We have no clean water to drink it because of water pollution. And when trees cut down, some animals disappear. There was more and more dirty smoke in the air. People’s health has been greatly affecting by air, noise and water pollution. Many people have died of disease caused by pollution. In order to live the better life, it’s time for us to protect our world.
Firstly, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, what saves money and reduces pollution. Use things so long as possible. Don’t use plastic bags. Besides, we must plant more trees and stop people cut them down. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful.

Answer 1

【小题1】seriously---serious       
【小题2】drink it ----把it 去掉
【小题3】when trees---后加are
【小题4】There was ---there is 
【小题5】affecting---affected  
【小题6】disease----diseases
【小题7】the----a
【小题8】what----which
【小题9】so long as---as long as   
【小题10】top people cut----stop people cutting

解析试题分析：如今环境污染日益严重。不仅人们没有干净可饮用的水，而且由于树木遭到砍伐，一些动物也灭绝了。人们的健康受到了空气，噪音和水污染的严重影响。为了过上更美好的生活，作者呼吁到了人们该治理污染，保护环境的时候了。
【小题1】seriously---serious。The environment pollution is more and more seriously today.。系动词is后应该跟形容词做表语，所以把seriously改为serious。     
【小题2】drink it ----把it 去掉。We have no clean water to drink it。此处是不定式做定语，不定式的动词和被修饰的名词之间是逻辑上的动宾关系，故去掉it。
【小题3】trees---后加are。And when trees cut down。此句中tree和谓语cut down之间是被动关系，应该用被动形式，在cut前加are。
【小题4】was -- is。There was more and more dirty smoke in the air.。根据语境可知此处是说现在的情况，应该用一般现在时，把was改为is。 
【小题5】affecting---affected。People’s health has been greatly affecting by air,。根据句意可知此处是现在完成时的被动形式 ，把affecting 改为affected。 
【小题6】disease----diseases。Many people have died of disease caused by pollution.。disease是可数名词，应该用复数形式，把disease改为diseases。
【小题7】the----a。In order to live the better life,。 固定短语：live a….. life“过着……的生活”，所以把the改为a。
【小题8】what----which。what saves money and reduces pollution.。此处是非限制性定语从句，what不引导定语从句，改为which。
【小题9】so -- as  。Use things so long as possible. 固定短语：as …..as possible“尽可能”，把so改为as。
【小题10】 cut---- cutting。we must plant more trees and stop people cut them down.固定短语：stop sb from doing sth“阻止某人做某事”，所以把cut改为cutting。
考点：考查短文改错。