Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的笔友Jim最近沉溺于玩电脑游戏，为此你很担心。Jim的表现和你的看法及建议如下：

Jim过去	do well in lessons and take an active part in the activities at school
Jim现在	be crazy about computer games，have no interest in schoolwork，don’t listen to teachers carefully in class，can’t hand in homework on time
你的看法	playing computer games can make you feel relaxed，but if you spend too much time on it，you will have less time to study and it may do harm to your health
你的建议	……

写作内容：

根据以上信息给Jim写一封信，内容包括：

1. Jim的表现；

2. 你的看法和建议。

写作要求：

1. 词数:100词左右;文章开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 文中不得使用真实人名、校名。

Dear Jim,

I really feel worried about you.

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As your friend, I’ll be glad to share your happiness and sadness. And best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I really feel worried about you. You used to do well in your lessons and take an active part in the activities at school. But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don’t listen to teachers carefully as before in class. Also, you can’t hand in homework on time.

Perhaps playing computer games can make you feel relaxed, but if you spend too much time on it, you will have less time to study and it may do harm to your health.

I hope you can achieve a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not join in some outdoor activities when you feel bored?

As your friend, I’ll be glad to share your happiness and sadness. And best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇给材料的应用文，写一封信，向吉姆提出建议。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一二人称，一般过去及现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如used to sth过去常常做某事；takepart in参加；as……as……和……一样；hand in上交；on time按时；do harm to伤害；why not do sth为什么不做某事等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。