Question

【题目】假如你是中学生李明，家住泉州。你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的故乡London，并希望了解你家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。

回信必须包括以下内容：

（1）自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；

（2）发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；

（3）存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等；

（4）对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。

注意：

（1）请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）词数不少于120；书信格式已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：高层建筑 high-rise building

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jason,

I’m more than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.

Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been built, high rise buildings standing in many parts of the city. More and more schools and hospitals are available for the native people. It is developing into a modern and charming city. However, there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution, which have a bad influence on people’s daily life. In my view, Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】However, there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution, which have a bad influence on people’s daily life.这句话运用非限定性从句。In my view, Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.这句话用了不定式作目的状语。文章还用了一些短语，如：more than，such as，have a bad influence on，in one’s opinion，so that，in future等等。