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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was young, I lived in the countryside. At that time, the trees there were very green, that left a deep impression on me and the water there was so much clear that I even could see the fish swimming. When it gets dark, the air was cooler than it in the daytime. People liked to walk out their houses to chat together. I liked to play games with my friends but ran along the village happily. As the moon rose highly in the sky, the village was lighting. When I looked up, I could see the moon and a few star. They were so close to me. It seemed that I could touch them. The life in the countryside were so wonderful.

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【解析】考查定语从句。which left a deep impression on me是一个非限制性定语从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，关系词在从句中作主语，指代整个主句内容，所以that改成which。

考查固定句型。那里的水是那样清澈，以至于我都能看到水里游着的小鱼。So…that太……以至于，是固定句型，所以去掉much。

考查时态。表示发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以gets改成got。

考查it 与 that 的区别。表示同一事物时，用it；表示同类事物时，用 that，所以it改成that。

考查固定短语。人们喜欢走出他们的房子，一起聊天。walk out of走出，是固定短语。

考查连词。play games with my friends与ran along the village happily是并列关系，所以but改成and。

考查副词。当月亮在空中高高地升起。虽然high和highly都是副词，但是它们的意思不同， high高，highly非常，所以highly改成high。

考查语态。“村庄”与“点亮”之间是被动关系，所以用被动语态。

考查名词。我看到一轮月亮和几颗星星。“几颗星星”是复数意义，所以star改成stars。

考查主谓一致。乡村的生活真好。“乡村的生活”是单数意义，所以were改成was。