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5．假设你班最近举行了一次班会，讨论怎样使英语学习变成一件快乐的事．请根据 提示信息，为某英语网站写一篇短文，谈谈你们的讨论情况并提出你的建议．
1．分析英语学习现状与原因．
2．提出你的建议，如：演讲或英文话剧等（至少三点）．
注意：1．词数100 字左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入字数．

Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．Most students believe that there are many ways to do so．First of all．We can have more interactive activities in class，such as discussions，interviews，story-telling and role-play．In this way，we can have more fun learning English．Secondly，we can take part in more out-of-class activities like English speech contest and English evenings．Thirdly，we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，because using English is the best way to learn．
These ideas sound reasonable and practical．From my experience，there are many other interesting and relaxing ways．For example，we can listen to English songs and watch English movies．We can also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen-friends on the Internet．All in all，what we need is more free time and more space．．

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分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们就怎样使英语学习变成一件快乐的事写一篇作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：分析英语学习现状与原因．提出你的建议，如：演讲或英文话剧等（至少三点）．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为分析英语学习现状与原因．第二部分为提出建议，如：演讲或英文话剧等（至少三点）．．
重点短语与句型：
take part in  参加
out-of-class activities 课后活动
English speech contest 英语演讲比赛
高分句型一：Most students believe that there are many ways to do so..此句用了that 引导宾语从句
高分句型二：All in all，what we need is more free time and more space．此句用了what引导主语从句

解答 Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．Most students believe that there are many ways to do so．（高分句型一） First of all．We can have more interactive activities in class，such as discussions，interviews，story-telling and role-play．In this way，we can have more fun learning English．Secondly，we can take part in more out-of-class activities like English speech contest and English evenings．Thirdly，we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，because using English is the best way to learn．（分析英语学习现状与原因．）
These ideas sound reasonable and practical．From my experience，there are many other interesting and relaxing ways．For example，we can listen to English songs and watch English movies．We can also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen-friends on the Internet．All in all，what we need is more free time and more space．（高分句型二）（ 提出建议）

点评 第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．