Question

16．当今社会很多人想助人为乐却有所顾虑，请你给二十一世纪英文报写一封信，讲述你的同学李华在放学途中帮助一位摔伤老人的事情．
要点如下：
1．事情的经过；                 
2．你的感想．
注意：
1．词数100左右；   
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；     
3．开头已给出（不计词数）．
Dear editor，
Nowadays，an increasing number of people are reportedly unwilling to help othes．                     
Yours．

Answer 1

分析 此题主要考察叙述故事的能力，要求完整地描述一件事情的经过以及感想．内容也是实际生活中的内容，所以我们在平时生活中要注意观察和思考．在描述实际内容时要做到言简意赅．注意在书写的时候，保证字迹工整，以及词汇和语法的正确使用．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：重要短语和句子提示：an increasing number of people越来越多的人；on her way home在他回家的路上； Such is Li Hua，a helpful，positive and optimistic person．李华是一个如此乐于助人，乐观的人；It is our duty to help people in need．去帮助有需要的人是我们的责任．
One day，on her way home，Li Hua came across an old man lying on the ground，seriously injured in the leg．（高分句型一）
Although there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good，I strong ly believe that she has done the right thing．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear editor，
       Nowadays，an increasing number of people are reportedly unwilling to help others．However，Li Hua acted differently．
       One day，on her way home，Li Hua came across an old man lying on the ground，seriously injured in the leg．（高分句型一）She immediately stopped，called 120 and practiced first aid．Soon，the ambulance came．When everything was Ok，she left for home．
       Such is Li Hua，a helpful，positive and optimistic person．Although there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good，I strong ly believe that she has done the right thing．（高分句型二）As responsible citizens，it is our duty to help people in need．Also，helping others means helping ourselves in a sense，doesn't it？
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Reader

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．