Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分

Life is not easy for any of us. We will unavoidably suffered bitterness and sadness from failure. Thus, there is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world. Most important, you will have an optimistic effect at the people around you. We all will live harmonious and happy life. It is good for our health as well.

However, sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others, but when you fail in doing nothing, you may have a bad mood. If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possibly. As we all know, every coin has two sides. So you should think more about its bright side. We are sure that everything will be better with time passed by. Remember: only you can make himself happy.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】suffered 改为suffer

【2】there改为it

【3】Most后的important改为importantly

【4】at改为on

【5】live后加a

【6】but改为or

【7】nothing改为something

【8】possibly改为possible

【9】passed改为passing

【10】himself改为yourself

【解析】

【1】suffered 改为suffer；考查情态动词的用法。这个句子中有一个情态动词will，后面若用动词，应用动词原型。故将suffered 改为suffer。

【2】there改为it；固定搭配。It is important for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事很重要。故将there改为it。

【3】Most后的important改为importantly；考查副词。副词可单独使用，形容词不可单独使用。如generally speaking一般来说用的是generally而不是general.故将most后的important改为importantly。

【4】at改为on；固定搭配。have an effect on对…有影响，故将at改为on。

【5】live后加a；固定搭配。live a …life 过着一个..的生活。故在live后加a。

【6】but改为or；考查连词。此处的“quarrel with others”和人争吵，“fail in doing …”做…失败了，是并列关系，都是说的不尽人意之事，所以没有转折的语气。故将but改为or。

【7】nothing改为something；结合前后文，这一句的句意应是，有的事情做失败了。故将nothing改为something。

【8】possibly改为possible；固定搭配。as +形容词+ as possible。故将possibly改为possible。

【9】passed改为passing；考查介词的用法。with是介词，后面的动词只能用v-ing形式。且有这样两个短语表示随时间的推移，with time passing ;as time passed 。故将passed改为passing。

【10】himself改为yourself；考查主谓一致。整篇文章以第二人称的形式展开，且最后一句主语为you。故将himself改为yourself。