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2．刚进入高中，一些同学对高中生活不太适应，为此，你校"英语俱乐部"就"How to enrich our life in the Senior School"展开征文比赛．就此话题，你向该社团投稿反映你的个人看法．
1．广交朋友．2．积极参加体育活动，强身健体．
3．努力拼搏，梦想进入理想大学．   4．…
提示：1．可加入一些细节，使文章更加通顺合理．
      2．词数：100字左右（开头部分不计）
强身健体：build up one′s  body   
How to enrich our Life in the Senior School
As senior school students，we′r e expected to make our life meaningful and enjoyable．

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分析 考查提纲式作文：要求根据提纲写一篇关于"How to enrich our life in the Senior School"的征文，所给提纲和要点是比较详细的，考生需要灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．使用比较高级 的短语和词汇．句式上要富有变化，不能太单调，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．
【亮点说明】范文要点齐全，不乏高级的词汇和句型：be expected to被期待做…，In a word，总之，in our spare time在我们的空闲时间，make good use of好好的利用，we can take an active part in sports so that we can build up our body，which will surely be good to our further study．这句话用了so that句型和which引导的非限制性定语从句，it's our duty to study hard to make sure that one day our dream of entering a key university will come true..这句话用了it做形式主语，还有文章还使用了Firstly，Secondly，Besides，这样的关联词使文章更加连贯．

解答 How to enrich our Life in the Senior School
As senior school students，we're expected to make our life meaningful and enjoyable．Here are some good tips for you．
Firstly，a life without a friend is a life without a sun，so why not make a lot of good friends and enjoy helping each other．（高分句型）Secondly，in our spare time，we can take an active part in sports so that we can build up our body，which will surely be good to our further study．（高分句型） Besides，it's our duty to study hard to make sure that one day our dream of entering a key university will come true．（高分句型）
In a word，life in the senior school is colorful and challenging，we should make good use of time to enrich our life．（高分句型） （101 words）

点评 提纲类写作的文章较开放式的文体，比较好写．学生在写作的过程中，首先思路要清晰，要对所表达的句子通顺的说出来，遇到不会的要学会替换所用语，来达到同样的意思．在每一篇作文中，对于表达观点的句子，都要用上起承转合的连词来加强文章的层次感，适当运用俗语，运用平时常用的句式来使文章富有变化，表达地道得体．