Question

4．假设你是李华，你的好友王林生病了．现在请你给他写一封信，要点包括：
1．听到好友生病时的心情；
2．劝他放弃熬夜等坏习惯；
3．建议他身体康复后要保证睡眠，经常锻炼，合理饮食．
注意：1．词数100左右；
      2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
You often stay up （1）late at night，which （2）is really a bad habit（你经常熬夜，这真是一个坏习惯）．
（1）stay up 熬夜
（2）which引导的非限制性定语从句，指代前面的主句，使得文章更简洁．
句型二：
it is essential that（1）you should keep a balanced diet，which is helpful to （2）your health（保持平衡的饮食对你来讲是必要的，这有助于你保持健康）．
It is  essential that…：…是必要的；从句中动词用虚拟语气，即"（should）+动词原形"；
be helpful to 对…有益的

解答 Dear Wang Lin，
I am terribly sorry that you have been ill for a few days and I hope that you will get well soon（表达自己的关心）．You often stay up late at night，which is really a bad habit[高分句型句型一]．Staying up has done great harm to your health and I hope that you can give up the bad habit（劝诫他去除坏习惯）．
To keep healthy，you should have enough sleep and take regular exercise．Taking proper exercise can make you active and keep you fit．In addition，it is essential that you should keep a balanced diet，which is helpful to your health[高分句型句型二]．（提出保持健康的建议）．
Your，
Li Hua

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点，不能有要点的遗漏．其次要考虑高级词语和句型的选用；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．