Question

短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am a high school student. A few days before, one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop the school. He said that he wanted to start his own business. I tried best to get him to change his mind, but I failed. I know it is difficult of him to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studies, yet I want to insist that he should give it a try. The process is more important than the results. Now there is only 60 days left before that test. I am not sure that his decision is right or wrong . I needed your advice.

Answer 1

【小题1】before改为ago
【小题2】friend改为friends
【小题3】去掉the
【小题4】在tried best之间加my
【小题5】of改为for
【小题6】good 改为well
【小题7】results---result
【小题8】is---are
【小题9】that改成whether/if
【小题10】needed改成need

解析试题分析：文章讲述作者的一个朋友想辍学，作者尽最大努力想说服他改变决定。
【小题1】几天前我的一个朋友告诉我他要辍学。before改为ago，a few days ago和过去时连用。
【小题2】one of后面用名词复数 friend改为friends。
【小题3】词组stop school辍学。
【小题4】我尽我最大努力想说服他改变决定。Try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事。在tried best之间加my。
【小题5】句型：It is +adj +for/of sb to do…,如果adj是修饰事情，用for，如果adj是修饰人，用of，这题difficult是修饰事情，用for。
【小题6】副词well修饰doing，good 改为well。
【小题7】过程比结果更重要。result就是一个，所以用单数。
【小题8】在考试前还剩下60天。这里使用there be句型，主语是60 days，be动词用are。
【小题9】I am not sure 后面接whether引导宾语从句
【小题10】这句话是一般现在时，needed改成need
考点：考查短文改错