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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Tom and Dick are next door neighbor who both work in same office. They often walk together to and from work. Once they were walking to home together while it suddenly started to rain. Tom quickly opened his umbrella and said proud, "My wife really has great foresight.” He added, “She said this morning it would rain and tell me to carry my umbrella." Dick smiled and walked up to her under the protection of the umbrella. He said, "Mine has even great foresight. She didn't let me carry one so she knew you'd share yours to me."

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【解析】１.句意：Tom and Dick是在同一个办公室工作的对门邻居。名词用复数形式，故把neighbour-neighbours。

２.ｉｎ　ｔｈｅ　ｓａｍｅ　ｏｆｆｉｃｅ在同一办公室，故在same前加the。

３.句意：他们正一起步行回家这时天开始下雨。ｗａｌｋ　ｈｏｍｅ步行回家，此处ｈｏｍｅ是副词，故把home 前的ｔｏ去掉。

４. 句意：他们正一起步行回家这时天开始下雨。ｂｅ　ｄｏｉｎｇ　ｓｔｈ．―――ｗｈｅｎ―――，正在做某事，这时候―――，故把while-when。

５.句意：自豪地说。副词修饰动词， 故把proud-proudly。

６.句意：他说今天早上将会下雨，并告诉我带雨伞。此处是表示过去的并列谓语，故把tell-told。

７.句意：Ｄｉｃｋ微笑着并走向他。Ｔｏｍ是男孩，故把her-him．

８．句意：Mine有更大的远见。ｅｖｅｎ修饰比较级，故把great-greater。

９.句意：她不让我带伞，因为她知道你会让我和你分享一把伞。此处是原因状语从句，故把ｓｏ―――ｂｅｃａｕｓｅ／ａｓ／ｆｏｒ／。

１０.句意：她不让我带伞，因为她知道你会让我和你分享一把伞。ｓｈａｒｅ　ｓｔｈ．　ｗｉｔｈ　ｓｂ．与某人分享某物，故把ｔｏ―――ｗｉｔｈ。