Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

A musician friend of me once went on an English course during his summer holidays. What he really wants to do was to improve his ability to think and react quick in spoken English. He said speaking a foreign language always made him to feel nervous, even if after three years of study. One of the teacher on the course had very strong views on music, but was not afraid to express them in the lessons. My friend spent most of the class time argue about music with a teacher. When his course finished, he found that his nervousness in English has completely disappeared, and he was speaking far fluently than before.

Answer 1

【答案】1.第一句me--mine

2.第二句wants--wanted

3.第二句quick--quickly

4.第三句去掉to

5.第四句teacher--teachers

6.第四句but--and

7.第五句argue--arguing

8.第五句a--the

9.第六句has--had

10.第六句fluently前加more

【解析】１.ａ　ｆｒｉｅｎｄ　ｏｆ　ｍｉｎｅ我的一位朋友，此处用名词性物主代词，表示双重所有，故把第一句me--mine

２.根据once曾经，可知句子用一般过去时态，故把第二句wants--wanted

３.副词修饰动词，故把第二句quick—quickly

４.固定结构：ｍａｋｅ　ｓｂ．　ｄｏ　ｓｔｈ．使某人做某事，故第三句去掉to

５. One of＋名词复数，故把第四句teacher--teachers

６.句意：培训班的一位老师对音乐有非常强的观点，并且不害怕在课上表达他们。根据句意可知此处是递进的并列关系，故把第四句but--and

７.固定搭配：ｓｐｅｎｄ―――（ｉｎ）ｄｏｉｎｇ　ｓｔｈ．在做某事上花费―――，故把第五句argue--arguing

８.句意：我的朋友花费课上大部分时间和这位老师关于音乐进行辩论。此处特指前面提到的老师，第五句a—the

９．句意：当他的课完成的时候，他发现他在英语方面的紧张已经完全消失。根据句意可知此处用过去完成时态，故把第六句has--had

１０.根据than可知用比较级，同时句中ｆａｒ也可放在比较级前面修饰比较级加强语气，故在第六句fluently前加more