Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的英国好友John来信说要来中国度假，期间将借住在你家一周。希望你能安排他的活动。请你给他写封回信。信的内容包括：

1.欢迎他的到来；

2.告知你的假期安排。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I'm very glad that you'll come to China for a holiday and stay at my home for a week.Here,I want to share my holiday schedules with you.

On one hand,we'll get up at six every morning and do morning exercise to build up our body.On the other hand, it's necessary to finish our homework as soon as possible.Then we'll have enough time to review what we have learned,which can help us prepare for the new lessons.

Besides exercise and learning,we can also go out to do some useful activities,such as visiting cultural museums, climbing the Great Wall and doing different volunteer work.I hope you'll enjoy my arrangements.

Looking forward to your arrival.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】
这是一篇回信。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：
1.本篇是一封给友人的回信。在回信时一定要注意措辞和语气，同时要注意到书信格式。

2.要点要齐全，在表达你的欢迎的同时，要告诉对方你的安排，但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。
3.根据要点，先组此句；句式丰富，避免单词。
4.注意文章一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。
【范文亮点】
1.文章采用了“Besides”等连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。
2.文章使用了“as soon as possible”“ Looking forward to”等句式短语。
3. On one hand和On the other hand句式的应用：

On one hand,we'll get up at six every morning and do morning exercise to build up our body.On the other hand, it's necessary to finish our homework as soon as possible.