Question

第Ⅱ卷（非选择题,总分35分）

第四部分   写作（共两节，满分35分）

 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

First, I’d like to thank you for your reminding, although I don’t agree with your view

which students should spend more time on their lessons instead of read novels．Indeed,

reading novels takes up some of the time that should spent on lessons, but it’ll make us know

what hard life is．Besides, by reading novels we can gain what we can’t learn from our

textbook．Of course, reading novels has it’s shortcomings．Novels that have wrong ideas will

make us to do something wrong．Maybe, in your eyes, the disadvantages of reading novels

outweighs the advantages．And in my opinion, reading novels is just as another pair of eyes,

which broadens my horizon．

Answer 1

1. which → that         2. read → reading  3. 在should和spent中间加be   4. what→how  

5. textbook → textbooks  6. it’s → its        7. to do去掉to       8. outweighs → outweigh  

And → But           10. as → like