Question

假如你是李华,你刚得知你们班的英国朋友Bob出了事故,对此你和你的同学们都感到很难过,现在同学们决定让你代表他们给Bob写一封慰问信。信的内容如下:
1.所有同学对他都表示同情,打算星期五下午派你为代表去看望他并给他带去他喜欢读的书；
2.让他不要担心学习,等他出院后,你们会帮他赶上；如果有什么需要你们做的事情,请他告知；
3.希望他在病床上不要过于悲伤,祝愿他早日康复。
注意:(1) 参考词汇:on behalf of 代表；
     (2)词数:100左右。
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Answer 1

Dear Bob,
     We were just told about the accident you had. I’m sorry to hear about it and our other classmates are all sad about the news. I’m going to see you on behalf of others on this Friday afternoon. I will bring you a couple of books you will enjoy. We will help you to catch up in school as soon as you are out of hospital. If there is anything else we can do for you, please let me know.
     All of us send our best wishes for your quick recovery. Don’t worry about your studies.
     We do hope that you will not be too sad in bed and that you will recover soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
 

试题分析：这是一篇慰问信，所以在语言的使用上要正式化，另外注意题目的要求，有三个要点，所以要按照这样一个顺序去写，注意不要有遗漏。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要充实文章内容，需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。慰问信
点评：本文属于慰问信，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。并且注意字数，100字左右。