Question

17．请讲述一个关于你（或你的朋友）的父母对子女无私的爱的故事，写一篇英语短文．主要内容包括：
1、讲述一个体现父母无私的爱的故事；
2、父母无私的爱对你（或你的朋友）带来的影响；
3、你认为作为儿女要如何回报父母的爱．
注意：1．词数不少于120个；
2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
My friend，Tom，is disabled from birth，who can only move in a wheelchair．
我的朋友Tom从出生就有残疾，他只能靠轮椅行动．
高分句型二：
No one can deny that parents are the ones who love us most and deserve our deepest love．
没有人能否认父母是世界上最爱我们的人，他们应当得到我们最真挚的尊敬和爱．
高分句型一：
My friend，Tom，is disabled from birth，who can only move in a wheelchair．
我的朋友Tom从出生就有残疾，他只能靠轮椅行动．
高分句型二：
No one can deny that parents are the ones who love us most and deserve our deepest love．
没有人能否认父母是世界上最爱我们的人，他们应当得到我们最真挚的尊敬和爱．
句型一 who can only move in a wheelchair．该句是一个由who作关系代词，且在从句中充当主语的非限制性定语从句，替代前面出现的先行词 Tom，注意此处不能使用that
句型二 ①that parents are the ones…该句是一个由that作引导词的宾语从句，that在句中不作句中成分
       ②who love us most and deserve our deepest love 此处是一个由who 引导的定语从句，在句中充当主语，替代前面的先行词the ones

解答 One possible version：
    Children are said to be a gift from God for parents．Therefore，most parents are grateful for this great gift and never hesitate to sacrifice for their children．My friend，Tom，is disabled from birth，who can only move in a wheelchair．（高分句型一）His parents devote all their love to him though most of their friends and relatives try to persuade them to give birth to one more child，which may at least ensure their happy life in their late years．Considerable difficulties are involved in looking after a disabled one，but Tom's parents make every effort to ensure he can live as happy a life as any normal child．Their devotion and selfless love make Tom an active，confident boy and a top student in school，the most promising one to be admitted to Beijing University．（列举事实）
     Tom's story is but one of the moving stories between parents and children．No one can deny that parents are the ones who love us most and deserve our deepest love．（高分句型二）As children，we should always be thankful to their love and be ready to love them in return．（提出建议）

点评 本书面表达为提纲类，但所给写作要点较为开放，即要求考生在写作时再合理范围内发散思维．写作时考生应注意所阐述的内容应切合主题，切忌偏离提纲要求．平日里应积累相应的词汇和短语，以使得文章生动．