Question

【题目】第二节书面表达
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
①表示歉意；
②说明原因；
③另约时间。
注意：
①词数100左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Bob,
I'm sorry to say that I cannot goto the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have toattend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not causeyou too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we'll havemore time to read and select books. If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 8:30outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I shouldbe available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇书信类作文。题目要求写一封道歉信，就不能如约一起去书店向Bob道歉，使用第一人称和一般现在进行时进行写作。写作内容包括：表达歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。
亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句so that we’ll have more time to read and select books；条件句If it’s convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短结合，使内容更加丰富。