Question

【题目】假设你是李华，宁德市青年志愿者协会(Ningde Youth Volunteer Association)计划从宁德市各 中学招募 500 名志愿者，进行急救知识普及活动，你想申请成为其中一员。请根据以下要点用 英语写一封自我推荐信：

1．个人情况：17 岁，男，出身医学世家。

2．个人优势：掌握基本急救知识，有救援经验，身体素质好。.

3．……

注意：1. 词数 100 左右，格式已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇: 普及 promote

Dear Sir/Madam,

Knowing that Ningde Youth volunteer Association plans to recruit 500 volunteers from every school,

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Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

Knowing that Ningde Youth Volunteer Association plans to recruit 500 volunteers from every school, I’m writing to express my sincere wish to become one of you to promote the knowledge of first

aid.

My name is Li Hua, a boy of 17. Born in a doctor family, I have a good knowledge of first aid, which I’m convinced will make a big difference. When emergencies happen, my abundant experience in saving lives and attending to the injured will guarantee I am of great help. In addition, I am in good physical condition thanks to the constant exercises and bodybuilding.

On the whole, I believe I am qualified to be a volunteer. I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封书信。宁德市青年志愿者协会(Ningde Youth Volunteer Association)计划从宁德市各 中学招募 500 名志愿者，进行急救知识普及活动，你想申请成为其中一员。请根据以下要点用 英语写一封自我推荐信：个人情况：17 岁，男，出身医学世家；个人优势：掌握基本急救知识，有救援经验，身体素质好；3．……。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是个人优势。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容齐全，重点突出，文中使用高级词汇和句子。My name is Li Hua, a boy of 17.句中使用同位语；I have a good knowledge of first aid, which I’m convinced will make a big difference.句中which引导非限制性定语从句；When emergencies happen, my abundant experience in saving lives and attending to the injured will guarantee I am of great help.时间状语从句和宾语从句完美结合；I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance.固定句式使用巧妙；另外，Born in a doctor family, In addition, On the whole,等的使用为文章增色添彩。