Question

【题目】假设你是王林，寒假期间你要到伦敦旅游，请你根据以下提示给你的英国好友Alex写一封信，请他推荐一个旅馆，要点如下：

1 介绍你伦敦之行的目的；

2 停留时间：5个晚上，从2月8日到12日；

3 房间要求：预定一个房间，旅馆要靠近公共汽车站；有独立浴室；可以上网；

注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Alex,

How is everything going recently?

Yours sincerely;

Wang Lin

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Alex,

How is everything going recently? I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me.

To experience different cultures and broaden my horizons, I will visit London during the winter holiday. When I am staying there, I want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights, from Feb 8 to Feb 12. I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station so that I can take a bus conveniently. In addition, to keep in touch with my family and friends, I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room.

I would appreciate it if you could help me. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,sincerely

Wang Lin

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，文章的要点基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。在表达要点时，要注意条理清楚，层次分明。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举要求的时候要使用合适的连接词，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些高级词汇：recommend sth to sb给某人推荐......，keep in touch with联系，gain access to the internet上网。运用了固定句型：I would appreciate it if...如果......我将感激不尽；I am looking forward to your early reply.期待您早日回复。范文中的句式多变，运用了不同的语法知识：To experience different cultures and broaden my horizons运用了动词不定式作目的状语；so that I can take a bus conveniently用了so that引导目的状语从句；I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station这句话在宾语从句里又套用了定语从句。范文中还用了连接副词in addition“另外；并且”，使文章更加通顺。