Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（   ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

Answer 1

小题1:加to
小题2:come→came
小题3:have→having
小题4:immediate→immediately
小题5:on→at
小题6:Neither→None
小题7:was→were
小题8:删除were或looked
小题9:and→but
小题10:a→an

试题分析：
小题1:want后加to 考查不定式。want后跟不定式作宾语，故wanted后加to。
小题2:come→came 考查时态。上下文都是过去时，故此处也用过去时。come改为came。
小题3:have→having 考查非谓语动词。have应改为having，现在分词短语作伴随状语。
小题4:immediate→immediately 考查副词用法。此处应用副词修饰动词jumped，故immediate→immediately。
小题5:on→at 考查动词短语。shoot sth at sth 把……射向……，故on→at
小题6:Neither→None. 考查代词。此处的箭不是两支，故Neither→None.
小题7:was→were 考查主谓一致。主语为复数，故was→were。
小题8:删除were或looked 考查固定句型。Were和looked不能连用，必须去掉一个。
小题9:and→but 考查连词。两个分句之间不是转折关系，故and→but。
小题10:a→an 考查冠词。impressive是以元音音素开头的单词，故用an。