Question

假设你是李华，作为交流学生去了美国新奥尔良市（New Orleans）学习生活了一年。在此期间，你住在Brown夫妇家中，他们为你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。请你给他们写一封感谢信，主要内容如下：

 ◆表示感谢

 ◆表达感受

 ◆欢迎来访

 ◆保持联系

 注意：

 1．词数100左右。

 2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

 3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

April 10

Dear Mr．and Mrs．Brown,

 I'm writing to you from my home in China．

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Mr．and Mrs．Brown,

   I'm writing to you from my home in China．I returned home safe and sound．When thinking of the wonderful days I spent in New Orleans, I just can't help thinking of both of you．It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay there such a happy experience．I’ve learned so much, not only English but also culture．And I really enjoyed a great deal, the fun and laughter we shared with each other．Thank you very much．I'll always remember this trip as well as your kindness．

   Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you．I’ll be very glad to show you around．And you’ll surely have a pleasant visit here．

   I’ll keep in touch and write to you later．Please take care!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本书面表达是要求学生写一封书信，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，对住在Brown夫妇家中，提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助，用一般过去时态。注意本文必须用第一人称。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如think of，can’t help doing，provide sth. to sb.，share with, it’s convenient to sb.，还运用句型It was kind of sb. to do sth.等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：when, not only … but also …, 等等。

考点：书信类作文