分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息社区委员会请你帮忙用英文以短文的形式写一封电子邮件,将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:说明举办此次活动的目的;时间:下周六上午8:00至11:00;内容:采摘苹果;报名:办公室,下周四下午5:00前;提示:带帽子、手套;欢迎踊跃参加. 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:The purpose of…的目的是;At the same time同时; join in参加;otherwise否则;
The picking will go on from 8:00 a.m.to 11:00 a.m.next Saturday and welcome all of the people in our community to join in the activity.(高分句型一)
To join in the activity,you should sign your name in the office before 5:00 p.m.next Thursday,which is the deadline!(高分句型二)
It is suggested that all the people who will join in picking apples should wear a hat and a pair of gloves because there will be a lot of leaves or dirty things that will otherwise fall on your head and make your hands dirty.(高分句型三)
解答 Hi,everyone,
We'll hold a meaningful activity-picking apples.The purpose of this activity is intended to help us know our neighbors in a relaxing way.At the same time,we can get refreshed and feel more energetic.The picking will go on from 8:00 a.m.to 11:00 a.m.next Saturday and welcome all of the people in our community to join in the activity.(高分句型一)
To join in the activity,you should sign your name in the office before 5:00 p.m.next Thursday,which is the deadline!(高分句型二)Don't miss it!Attention!It is suggested that all the people who will join in picking apples should wear a hat and a pair of gloves because there will be a lot of leaves or dirty things that will otherwise fall on your head and make your hands dirty.(高分句型三)
Be active,everyone in our community!
The Community Board
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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