Question

1．假设你是李华，5月4日学校为你们举办了18岁成人宣誓仪式． 请根据下列要点给你在美国的笔友Tom 发一封电子邮件，描述整个活动过程并简述你的感受．
要点：
1．宣誓仪式；
2．感谢家长和老师的培养，培育；
3．表演节目；
注意：1．词数100左右
2．开头，落款已为你写好
3．参考词汇：宣誓 make an oath；
举行成年宣誓仪式 hold a growing-up ceremony

Dear Tom，
It's great to receive your e-mail．
                                    
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给美国笔友Tom 发一封电子邮件，描述18岁成人宣誓仪式整个活动过程并简述自己的感受．这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时，内容要点包括：宣誓仪式；感谢家长和老师的培养，培育；表演节目；我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为描述18岁成人宣誓仪式整个活动过程．第二部分为简述自己的感受．
重点短语与句型：
 took place 发生
 hold a growing up ceremony  举行成人宣誓仪式
 a sense of duty 责任感
put on 上演，上映
高分句型一：Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently．此句用了两个定语从句
高分句型二：And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us..此句用了现在分词作后置定语

解答 Dear Tom，
     It is great to receive your email．Now I'd like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday．In the afternoon we held a growing up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday．At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on．Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently．（高分句型一） And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us（高分句型二）．Finally，we put on wonderful performances，singing and dancing．（ 描述18岁成人宣誓仪式整个活动过程）
     We learned a lot from the activity．I think it's very important for us．I will remember the day in my life．（简述自己的感受）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．