Question

【题目】短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My time travel trip was certainly an exhausting one. A company, well-known as its expertise, transported us into a future in a time capsule. It swung gentle sideways as we lay relaxing and dreaming. However, as soon as we arrived, we were shocked at the terrible surrounding and hit by a lack of fresh air. Besides, “time lag” kept me got flashbacks from my previous time period for the first few days, that made me nervous. Flying a carriage was not easy, either. Problems arose the moment when we reached a large market. With too many carriages flying by in all directions, my friend and guide, Wang Ping, swept up into the centre of it! What was I supposed to do?

Answer 1

【答案】①as改成for ②future前的a改成 the ③gentle改成gently ④relaxing改成relaxed ⑤surrounding改成surroundings ⑥got改成getting ⑦that改成which ⑧删除when ⑨swept前加was ⑩it改成them
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，作者讲述了参加时旅商务公司组织的一次旅行的经历。①介词误用。句意：一个公司，因为它的专长而闻名。be well-known for"因为......而闻名"，故把as改成for。②冠词误用。句意：将把我们变成未来一个时间舱。根据句意可知，把future前的a改成 the。③副词误用。副词修饰动词，故把gentle改成gently。④.形容词误用。句意：当我们躺着，感到放松和充满梦想的时候，它向一侧温柔地摇摆着。故把relaxing改成relaxed。⑤名词的数误用。句意：在这可怕的环境里，我们感到震惊。surroundings “环境，周围的事物”，故把surrounding改成surroundings。

⑥固定搭配误用。keep sb. doing sth.“保持某人一直做某事”，故把got改成getting。⑦引导词误用。此处是一个非限制性定语从句，修饰前面整个句子，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，故把that改成which。⑧连词误用。此处the moment“一......就......”，相当于as soon as引导时间状语从句，故删除when。⑨语态误用。句意：我的朋友兼向导王平被扫到他们中心。可知用一般过去时态的被动语态，主语是单数第三人称形式，故在swept前加was。

⑩代词误用。句意：我的朋友兼向导王平被扫到他们中心。此处用them代替前面的carriages，故把it改成them。