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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有10处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）花掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Last Saturday, my family took a train trip to Guangzhou. The train was crowd and slow, but the scenery were just great! On the day we arrive, we visited several famous buildings. After that we had lunch in an Indian restaurant, which they didn’t use plates! We served the food on fresh leaves, and we ate with our hands. In the afternoon, we went for walk in the gardens with a great many of trees and flowers I’d never seen. Then, we did some shoppings in the town centre. It wasn’t that cheap, so there were a variety of nice things there. How a fantastic day!

Answer 1

【答案】1.crowd改为crowded

2. were改为was

3. arrive改为arrived

4. which改为where/in which

5. We改为They

6. for walk之间加a

7. many of trees去掉of

8. shoppings 改为shopping

9. so改为but

10. How改为What

【解析】1.句意：火车拥挤、慢，但是景色是好的。形容词做表语，故把crowd改为crowded。

2. the scenery是句子主语，不可数名词，后面的谓语动词用单数形式，故把were改为was。

3.根据Last Saturday可知句子用一般过去时态，故把arrive改为arrived。

4.此处restaurant做先行词，在后面的非限制性定语从句中做地点状语，故把which改为where/in which。

5.句意：他们给我们端上有新鲜叶子的食物。根据句意可知把We改为They。

6.固定搭配：go for a walk去散步，故在for walk之间加a。

7.固定搭配：a great many +名词复数，故把many of trees去掉of。

8.固定搭配：do some shopping购物，故把shoppings 改为shopping。

9.句意：城镇中心的东西不是那么便宜，但是哪里有各种各样不错的商品。此处表示转折关系，故把so改为but。

10. day是名词，所以感叹句应该用what引导，故把How改为What。