Question

10．假设你是李华，新学期开始你校成立了学生健康成长中心，分设两大功能区．根据下图，给你的美国笔友Tom写信，介绍该中心的情况；作为学生活动组织部部长，对全校的春季学生活动安排提出自己的设想并征求Tom的建议．

注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3．开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入众词数． 
Dear Tom，
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Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours
Li hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
One is Psychological Consultation Room，where students can solve their emtional problems with our professional teachers．
高分句型二：
We'll spend some time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy．
句型一 where students can solve their emtional problems…该句是一个由where引导的非限制性定语从句，where在从句中是关系副词，充当地点状语
句型二 which we hope will make them happy．该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中替代前面整个主句的内容
此外，该作文还使用了以下高级词汇和短语：set up 成立  be intended to 打算做某事  look forward to 盼望

解答 Dear Tom，
  I have good news to tell you．The Students'Healthy Growth Center has been newly set up in our school，consisting of two functional areas．One is Psychological Consultation Room，where students can solve their emtional problems with our professional teachers．（高分句型一）The other office is intended to arrange the favourite school activities of our own．
   As an organizer of students'activities，I had a heated discussion with others about our spring plans．We're going to have a sports meet next month and the students of Grade one will visit the nursing home to help the elderly people．We'll spend some time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy．（高分句型二） What do you think of our ideas？
   Looking forward to your early reply．
 Yours，
 Li hua

点评 本文是图画类写作，考生在写作前应仔细观察所给图画，再运用准确的、合适的语言结合实际将图片内容描述清楚．写作过程中切忌偏离主题，尽量做到图文搭配．