Question

【题目】假设你是李华，在一个礼品网站为你的姐姐订购了一份生日礼物。礼物是一个标有姓名、生日及祝福语的有卡通动物形象的粉色杯子。收到礼物后你和姐姐都很满意。请给你的英国笔友Tom发一封邮件.

内容：

1.描述网购的礼物；

2.介绍网上支付及配送情况；

3.谈谈你对网上购物的看法。

注意：

1．词数不少于120个；

2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

Dear Tom,

I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the internet three days ago.

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I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the internet three days ago. It is a beautiful pink cup decorated with my sister’s name, her date of birth, and some best wishes to her as well. It’s so lovely a cup with a picture of a cartoon dog on it that both my sister and I likes it at the first sight.

Besides, I am very satisfied with Alipay Security Control, which is very convenient and safe. And so is the delivery service. I have received the cup within two days. Don’t you think it’s very fast?

I have enjoyed shopping online very much through this experience ,. There is no doubt that more and more people prefer shopping online nowadays .We don’t have to spend much time going to the shops or markets with such a good variety of choices on the internet.Agree with me?

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲作文，要求以所给的提示为内容写一篇封电子邮件。根据提示的信息可知，文章应写书信，用第一人称，一般现在时为主。写作时要充分发挥想象，适当地添加自己的观点，使文章内容丰满，并达到要求的字数。此外，为了提高文章档次，还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇，并添加关联词让行文流畅。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达格式规范，语言流畅。第一段向笔友描述了网购的礼物；第二段介绍了网上支付及货物配送的情况；第三段就网上购物谈了自己的看法。本文的亮点是运用了复杂的句式如非限制性定语从句等，提升了文章的档次；There is no doubt that...、so...that 等结构的运用也为文章增添了亮色。