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5．古人说读万卷书不如行万里路，近代人强调知行合一，现代人认为知识要活学活用．请结合你的自身经历，写出你对书本知识和实际经验的看法．字数：100左右．

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分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息古人说读万卷书不如行万里路，近代人强调知行合一，现代人认为知识要活学活用．请结合你的自身经历，写出你对书本知识和实际经验的看法．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，2、要在合理范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：in practice实践中；Furthermore而且；on the other hand另一方面；In fact事实上；Moreover而且；
The knowledge we gain from books and formal education enables us to learn about things that we have no opportunity to experience in daily life．（高分句型一）
It is said that one learns best by doing，and I believe that this is true，whether one is successful or not．（高分句型二）
That is why I believe that knowledge gained from practical experience is more important than that acquired from books．（高分句型三）

解答 Which is more important，knowledge from the book you read，or personal experience you gain in practice？The answer may vary from person to person．
       The knowledge we gain from books and formal education enables us to learn about things that we have no opportunity to experience in daily life．（高分句型一） Furthermore，we can study all the places in the world and learn from people we will never meet in our lifetime，just by reading about them in books．
       Practical experience，on the other hand，can give us more useful knowledge．It is said that one learns best by doing，and I believe that this is true，whether one is successful or not．（高分句型二）In fact，I think making mistakes is the best way to learn．Moreover，if one wants to make new advances，it is necessary to act．That is why I believe that knowledge gained from practical experience is more important than that acquired from books．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．