Question

11．根据题目所提出的具体要求，写出一篇连贯完整的短文．词数不少于60．
假如你是李华，参加了学校组织的主题为"我们的生活与环境"活动．请根据下面提供的信息，为你校校刊英语栏目投稿，介绍本次活动并谈谈你的感受．
稿件的开头已经为你写好．
Time：July 15^th-20^th，2013
Content：
●give a speech on Human and Nature
●have a discussion on public transportation
●collect used bottles
●…
Our school organized an activity named Our Life and Our Environment．
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Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
We also collected used bottles for recycling and told people around us to save water in the neighbourhood．
我们还收集了回收瓶，并告诉我们周围的人节约用水．
高分句型二：
Environment is so important to our life．We should do something to protect it．
环境对我们的生命如此重要．我们应该做些什么来保护它．

解答 Our school organized an activity name our life and our environment．
It lasted from June 15th to 20th 2012．During these days，we took part in a lot of interesting activities．A teacher from Beijing University gave us a speech on Human and Nature．We learned a lot from the speech．We had a discussion on public transportation．We decided to go to school by bus or subway more often．We also collected used bottles for recycling and told people around us to save water in the neighbourhood（高分句型一）．All of us were tired but happy because we did good things to others and to the environment？Environment is so important to our life．We should do something to protect it（高分句型二）．Protecting the earth is protecting ourselves．I hope to take part in this kind of activities again．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．