Question

18．假定你是李华，向在你校学习的美国交换生Adam借了一本英文小说，但不慎丢失，一时又买不到．请给他写电子邮件，说明情况．要点包括：
 1．表示歉意；    2．说明物品丢失的经过；    3．提出可能的解决方案．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
 3．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Adam，
                                              
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语borrow sth  from 从哪借；in a hurry 匆忙地；help sb do sth帮某人做某事；I like it so much that I took it with me wherever I went．这个句子中运用wherever引导的让步状语从句；Unfortunately，the other day during a trip to Beijing I was in such a hurry to get off the train that I forgot to put it back in my bag这个句子中运用到such..that..如此以致于；Hard as I tried，I was not able to find the novel in any bookstore here这个句子运用as引导的倒装句，表示虽然；

解答 Dear Adam，
  I'm deeply sorry but I have to let you know that I lost the English novel Gone with the Wind which I borrowed from you a month ago．（高分句型）I like it so much that I took it with me wherever I went．Unfortunately，the other day during a trip to Beijing I was in such a hurry to get off the train that I forgot to put it back in my bag．（高分句型）I'm so sorry as I know the novel was a birthday present from your father．
   Hard as I tried，I was not able to find the novel in any bookstore here．（高分句型）I wonder if you would like to take the Chinese-English version which will hopefully help improve your Chinese．（高分句型）
   Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．