Question

假如你叫朱文，你的美国笔友Rick欲了解中国学生“学雷锋小组(Learn-from-Lei Feng Group)”是怎么回事儿。请按下列要点用英语写一封120—150词的电子邮件。

(1) 简要介绍雷锋其人。

雷锋出生在湖南省望城县,虽然只有短暂的22岁，但他作为一名解放军战士，努力工作，乐于助人，一生做好事无数，被视为民族英雄，人们的楷模。

(2)中学生学雷锋小组的情况：人数不等，自主结合，志愿做好事

(3)你对此类活动的看法。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Rick,

I’m glad you are interested in our Learn-from-Lei Feng Groups. First of all, you might need to know who Lei Feng is. Born in Wangcheng, Hunan, Lei Feng lived a short life of only 22years. As a soldier in the People’s Liberation Army, he worked hard and was always ready to help others. He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a national hero and morel for every citizen.

There are lots of Learn-from-Lei Feng Groups in China’s middle schools, all of which formed voluntarily and are usually small in size: in threes or fours or more. The groups carry out various activities such as cleaning up streets or parks, helping out in homes for the elderly, and so on.

I believe such activities are of great value in educating the people and building a harmonious society.

Yours,

Zhu Wen

【解析】

试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。