Question

【题目】假如你叫李华。你的英国朋友John在学习中文时遇到了一些困难：如没有充足的时间学习中文、汉字很难学并容易遗忘、听力不好等。他来信向你寻求学好中文的建议。

现在，请你用英语给他回一封信，按以下要点答复：

1.看中文的书籍和杂志以学习汉字；给中国的朋友写信或发电子邮件练习书写；

2.看中文电影练习听力。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

How is it going? I’m writing to you because you asked me to help you with studying Chinese. I appreciate it very much that you desire to study this language, and I’m going to give you some advice.

First of all, you said that you didn’t have enough time to learn Chinese. In that case, I suggest that you read books and magazines in Chinese in you spare time to improve your level of vocabulary and you won’t forget the words which you’ve already learnt.

Secondly, you might write letters or e-mails in Chinese as well, because it can help you to practice what you have learned. Another good thing is to watch films in Chinese, which is quite useful to improve your listening skills.

You know, there are a lot of ways to study Chinese and improve your skills, but it all depends on you. I hope these suggestions will help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求是要写一篇回信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是要写一篇提建议的回信。英国朋友在学习中文时遇到了困难，想让李华帮忙提出一些学习中文的方法，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）read books and magazines in Chines；write letters or e-mails in Chinese； watch films in Chinese等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句和不定式的使用I suggest that you read books and magazines in Chinese in you spare time to improve your level of vocabulary and you won’t forget the words which you’ve already learnt.。非限制性定语从句 Another good thing is to watch films in Chinese, which is quite useful to improve your listening skills. 全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。