Question

【题目】假定你是李华。请你代表班级写封邮件给下周四即将回国的外教Johnson先生，邀请他参加3月12日晚上7点为感谢其出色教学而举办的欢送晚会。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr Johnson,

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr Johnson,

I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 4. Knowing that you will return to your own country next Thursday, we have decided to hold a farewell party in your honour at 7 pm on March 12 in our classroom. I am writing on behalf of my class to invite you to come.

We are very grateful for your putting in so much effort and being patient with us, from which we benefit a lot. What's more, your kindness, humor and encouragement become our motivation of study, making English learning a kind of joy. Thank you so much!

May we have the pleasure of your company? We are sincerely looking forward to your reply and attendance.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是要求代表班级写封邮件给下周四即将回国的外教Johnson先生，邀请他参加为感谢其出色教学而举办的欢送晚会。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全，包括活动内容、时间、地点、参加人。(2)人称使用要恰当，语气要恳切。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】1.使用高级句型：包含非限制性定语从句的句子We are very grateful for your putting in so much effort and being patient with us, from which we benefit a lot.；现在分词（making）作结果状语What’s more，your kindness, humor and encouragement become our motivation of study, making English learning a kind of joy；2.使用了过渡词语：What’s more等。3.使用了重要短语：on behalf of代表；be patient with耐心对待；benefit from从中收益；look forward to期待。