Question

【题目】阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。

John Hydes, who served as a firefighter for 15 years in New Zealand before moving to Australia, is not only new to the neighbourhood, he’s also new to the country.But that didn’t stop him becoming a local hero recently when he pulled two kids from a burning house.

“What he did was fantastic.It was a very brave act.Our family can thank him for our lives.”The moment the kids’mother saw what Mr.Hydes did for her family, tears started welling up in her eyes and falling down her cheeks.

However, Mr.Hydes, who settled here six months ago, said he wasn’t thinking when he saved his neighbour’s son, 5, and daughter, 7, from their PointCook home minutes before the roof fell.

It was said that the children’s mother and the grandfather was occupied in housework outside the gate when the house caught fire.As they saw the thick smoke, they were scared out, unable to say a word.In spite of the phone call, the fire engine could not arrive quickly.The two children were in the bedroom.Desperate and hopeless, the kids’mother knelt down, crying at the top of her voice.Because of excessive shock, the old grandfather was in the hospital for a long time.

“When there are kids in danger you haven’t got time to think, you’ve got to act, ”the father of three said. “I hadn’t met my new neighbours before coming to their help.It’s just a different way of meeting them, ”he laughed.Actually, it was nothing new for Mr.Hydes to jump into a burning building.This time, however, he did it without protective clothing.Later on he recalled the thrilling scene of his fighting the fire.

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

Mr.Hydes was in bed when he heard screaming before 9 p m.

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Paragraph 2:

“I was greeted(映…的眼帘)by two black and whitefaces screaming for help, ”he said.

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Answer 1

【答案】Mr.Hydes was in bed when he heard screaming before 9 p.m.He rushed outside to find the kids’s mother, and grandfather in front of their house, crying that the kids’were still inside.On seeing this, he went through the thick smoke wearing just a T—shirt, shorts and no shoes, but un1uckily found the door to the children’s bedroom blocked by boxes.Going around the back of the house, Mr.Hydes broke the bedroom window with his hands.

“I was greeted(映……的眼帘)by two black and white faces screaming for help, ”he said.Luckily, Mr.Hydes quickly pulled both of the children to safety before the fire entered the bedroom.He said it was the young girl’s quick thinking in closing’the bedroom door that saved her’and her brother’s lives.Dark as the house inside was, the brave girl hugged her young brother tightly, waiting for the coming help.On hearing John’s shouting, the 1ittle girl screamed at the top of her voice.Thanks to John’s bravery and calmness, the two children were finally reunited with their family happily.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，刚到澳大利亚不久的消防员John Hydes冒着生命危险救了邻居的两个孩子。邻居对他的行为表示感恩，认为他是一个真正的英雄，但John Hydes认为救孩子是出于他的本能反应。

续写部分分为两段，第一段的开头是：在晚上9点之前Mr.Hydes听到尖叫声时，他已经躺下……，所以应该接着写他起床循着声音走过去，发现孩子的妈妈和爷爷都在着火的房子无助地哭着，并且告诉他两个孩子还在房子里面。然后，Mr.Hydes不顾自己没有穿防火服冲进去救孩子。第二段的开头是：他说：“我看到两个黑白相间的脸向我呼救。”……所以应该接着写两个孩子虽然很害怕但意识很清晰，他们看到Mr.Hydes 呼救的声音更大了，Mr.Hydes 迅速地把大的孩子拉上，小的孩子抱上，及时将他们带出了快要坍塌的房子。孩子的妈妈和爷爷看到孩子后都很高兴，并且连连感谢Mr.Hydes，认为他很勇敢是他们的英雄。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给的划线词，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还有注意所续写的短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。按要求完成写作任务。