Question

4．近年来，部分学校的运动会花费越来越高．现在，请你就此现象，按以下提示，写一篇英语短文．
1）花费增髙体现：买运动服、做海报等；
2）相应弊端：造成浪费、增加负担；
3）提出建议：培养团队意识、减压和娱乐．
注意：1）词数：100宇左右；
2）文中不得出现你本人和学校的真实名字；
3）短文的开头已为你写出，不计人总词数．
参考词汇：校运会 the school sports meeting
In recent years，some school sports meetings have cost more and more．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，时态以一般现在时态为主．内容包括：一 部分学校的运动会存在的花费增髙的弊端；二 提出建议．
高分句型：
1．For example，it is typical of more and more students to purchase the sports uniforms，which（which引导定语从句，代指the sports uniforms） they don't usually wear in their daily life．句子里it is typical of sb to do sth表示"对某人来说，做某事是典型的"．
例如，越来越多的学生往往会买运动服，而在平时他们根本就不穿．
2．In my opinion，when （when引导状语从句）we are having a school sports meeting，we'd better focus on the sports events themselves，try to develop the team spirit，relieve our pressure and get fun as well．句子里 focus，try，relieve，get是并列关系的动词，做had better 的宾语．
依我看来，当我们参加运动会的时候，我们最好关注运动项目本身，努力养成团队精神，缓解压力并且得到乐趣．

解答 In recent years，some school sports meetings have cost more and more．For example，it is typical of more and more students to purchase the sports uniforms，which they don't usually wear in their daily life【高分句型一】．Besides，posters and slogans for the sports meetings are made almost every time，which usually cost a large amount of money．And unfortunately，these behaviors result in a big waste of money and they will also put a heavy burden on our parents．（部分学校的运动会存在的花费增髙的弊端）
     In my opinion，when we are having a school sports meeting，we'd better focus on the sports events themselves，try to develop the team spirit，relieve our pressure and get fun as well．【高分句型二】（提出建议）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
阅卷老师在看卷时主要关注内容是否完整，条理是否清楚，交际是否得体，语言是否准确，所以我们在高中三年里的写作时，要注意这几方面的问题．