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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear friends,

May I have you attention, please? I'm going to talk about something focusing in Protecting Wildlife. So far millions of species have died off or, have endangered mainly for two reasons. For one thing, man has been killing them for food or other commercial reasons. Take antelopes for example. Poachers hunt them for their fur, that can be made into luxurious shawls. For another, human civilization has been developing very fast that man has invaded and destroyed wild animals' natural habitats. Human activity have greatly threatened their existence. If all the wild animals disappear one day from the planet, humans would feel lonely. The world is beautiful for its diversity. Besides, some animals are extreme useful in the field of science, while others are especially adorable, unique, and keep us a good company. However, we should learn to share the earth with them. Thank you for your time.

Answer 1

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【解析】1. 考查代词。修饰名词用形容词性物主代词，不能用人称代词。故you改为your。

2. 考查介词。句意：我将要讨论的事情集中在保护野生动物上。focus on“集中”，是常用搭配。故in改为on。

3. 考查动词。endangered“濒危的”是形容词，需加be动词构成系表结构，根据so far可知，此处使用现在完成时，故have后加been。

4. 考查定语从句。which can be made into luxurious shawls是非限制性定语从句，先行词是 fur，在从句中作主语，指物，用关系代词which，that不能引导非限制定语从句。故that改为which。

5. 考查固定句型。句意：再则，人类文明一直发展的非常快以致于人类侵略和破坏了野生动物的自然栖息地。so…that…是固定搭配，表示“如此……以致于……”。故very改为so。

6. 考查名词。activity“活动”是可数名词，根据have可知，此处应该用复数，故activity改为activities。

7. 考查动词。根据后半句谓语动词would feel可知，此处使用了与将来相反的虚拟语气，因此if条件句谓语动词使用一般过去时或者should+动词原形。故disappear改为disappeared/should disappear。

8. 考查副词。extremely作状语修饰形容词useful，作状语用副词。故extreme改为extremely。

9. 考查冠词。company“陪伴”是不可数名词，keep sb. company“陪伴某人”是常用短语。故去掉good前的a。

10. 考查连词。上文提到“动物是有用的、特别可爱的、独一无二的、陪伴我们的”，因此我们应该学会与他们共享地球，上下文是因果关系，不是转折关系。故However改为Therefore/Thus/Hence。