假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mr Johnson,
I’m writing to tell you that I had a safety journey back to Beijing. Thanks to your kindness, I had a wonderfully time in Australia. It is my first time to go abroad and I was naturally a bit nervous when I was arrived. When I saw you at an airport, I knew from your warm smile that something would be all right. With your help, I visited so many places of interests in Australia, where impressed me a lot. I hope some day you will go to visit Beijing and I will act like a guide to show you around the city.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.safety改为safe
2.wonderfully改为wonderful
3.is改为was
4.去掉was
5.an改为the
6.something改为everything
7.interests改为interest
8.where改为which
9.go改为come
10.like改为as
【解析】
1.journey，故应将safety改为safe.
2.time ，故将wonderfully改为wonderful
3.
4.
5.
6.
7. place/ places of interest.在该短语中place为可数名词，而interest为不可数名词，故将interests改为interest.
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10. as：充当；担任…角色，故将该句中的like改为as.
考点：短文改错
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