Question

【题目】假设你是校英文报的编辑李华，请用给来自英国的交换生Eric写一封邮件，感谢他为校报提供稿件。内容包括：

1. 表示感谢；

2. 简要评价其稿件；

3. 希望继续供稿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Eric,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric,

I am writing to express our thanks for your articles for our school English newspaper.

You have been contributing to our English newspaper since you came to our school as an exchange student. We really appreciate your excellent writing skills and your serious attitude to your work. Your articles cover a large variety of topics, including history culture, travel and school life, from which readers have learned more about Britain and benefited a lot. You have become one of the best loved writers of the paper. I believe with your articles, our English newspaper will become more and more popular.

Looking forward to more articles from you!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，感谢来自英国的交换生Eric为校报提供稿件。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

人称：第一、二人称

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分法

要点：

1. 表示感谢；

2. 简要评价其稿件；

3. 希望继续供稿。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

English newspaper；contribute to；exchange student；writing skills；a large variety of；history culture；school life；learn about；one of the best…；more and more popular；look forward to等

第三步：连词成句

1. I am writing to express our thanks for your articles for our school English newspaper.

2.You have been contributing to our English newspaper since you came to our school as an exchange student.

3. We really appreciate your excellent writing skills and your serious attitude to your work.

4. Your articles cover a large variety of topics, including history culture, travel and school life, from which readers have learned more about Britain and benefited a lot.

5. You have become one of the best loved writers of the paper.

6. I believe with your articles, our English newspaper will become more and more popular.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

for；since；as；and等

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改