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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir or Madam

I’ve learned from the newspaper dial my company is looking for a clerk. I’m very interesting in the job and I’d like to apply for at the position.

First of all* allow me introduce myself. I have just graduated from senior high school and take the College Entrance Examination. I want to find an part - time job in the summer. I’m 18 years old and have a good knowledge of English, especially in terms at speaking and listening. In fact, I won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school last year. Besides, I’m quite easy - going and therefore very popular among my classmate.

I sincere hope you can give me a chance. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】1. my改为your

2. interesting改为interested

3. 去掉at

4. me后面加to

5. take改为taken

6. an改为a

7. at改为of

8. hold改为held

9. classmate改为classmates

10. sincere 改为sincerely

【解析】

my → your 考查代词。“我”是从报纸上得知对方公司要招收职员。故my → your。

interesting改为interested 考查形容词。固定短语be interested in something意思是“对……感兴趣”。本句意思是：我对这份工作很感兴趣并想应聘这个职位。

去掉at 考查介词。apply for something就是申请某物或某事，介词for的后面不需要再加别的介词。故去掉at。

me后面加to 考查非谓语动词。allow somebody to do something是“允许某人做某事”，后面是动词不定式作somebody的宾语补足语。

take改为taken 考查谓语动词。本句是一个主语，两个并列的谓语动词，因此形式上要保持一致。这里是现在完成时，后面的take也应该用过去分词的形式。

an改为a 考查冠词。a part - time job是“一份临时工”的意思，part-time的读音是以辅音开始，因此用a，而不能用an。故an改为a。

at改为of 考查介词。固定短语in terms of是“在……方面”的意思。

hold改为held 考查非谓语动词。held in our school last year是过去分词短语作后置定语，限定前面的名词短语the English speech competition，且短语和hold之间是被动关系，故用过去分词表示被动和完成。

classmate改为classmates 考查名词的复数形式。这里classmate是同班同学的意思,是可数名词，要用其复数形式。

sincere 改为sincerely 考查副词。sincerely是“真诚地”意思，这里用副词来修饰谓语动词hope。