Question

11．假如你叫李华，最近你校在为一批来自英国的假期学生征寻住宿家庭，你有意申请．请用英语写封自荐信，说明你申请的理由．
1．介绍家庭情况
2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3．词数100左右；开头已写好，不入计总词数．
住宿家庭 host family．
Dear Sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students．Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，our large fully-equipped apartment can meet all their needs．（高分句型一）
Apart from the convenient public transportation，our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest．With fluent English and an outgoing personality，my parents and I are sure to have no difficulty communicating with them．Above all，we have hosted some American friends，through which we've gained lots of experience．（高分句型二）In addition，my mother is expert in cooking，and it can guarantee them a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them．（高分句型三）Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你叫李华，最近你校在为一批来自英国的假期学生征寻住宿家庭，你有意申请．请用英语写封自荐信，说明你申请的理由，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：介绍家庭情况；可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Located in位于，坐落于；Apart from除…之外；places of interest名胜古迹； have no difficulty  in doing sth做…方面没有困难；Above all最重要的是；In addition另外；
．Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，our large fully-equipped apartment can meet all their needs．（高分句型一）
Above all，we have hosted some American friends，through which we've gained lots of experience．（高分句型二）
  I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students．Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，our large fully-equipped apartment can meet all their needs．（高分句型一）
Apart from the convenient public transportation，our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest．With fluent English and an outgoing personality，my parents and I are sure to have no difficulty communicating with them．Above all，we have hosted some American friends，through which we've gained lots of experience．（高分句型二）In addition，my mother is expert in cooking，and it can guarantee them a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them．（高分句型三）Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．