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9．近期，上海某中学高一学生进行了关于街头艺人的讨论．讨论的题目是"街头艺人是否要持证上街表演"．请你根据下表中的提示写一篇英语短文，介绍讨论的情况．

一些同学的观点	另一些同学的观点
街头艺人应该经过一定的考核程序持证表演，那么他们的表演会更专业更安心． 假冒艺人减少，社会秩序也会更稳定…	街头艺人为了生存而表演，没有必要持证． 群众需要各种艺人来丰富业余生活，不应该对他们进行限制…
你的观点：…

注意：1．短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2．词数120词左右．
参考词汇：程序procedure   稳定的stable  假冒者pretender
Recently，a class in Shanghai has held a discussion about whether street artists should perform with a license on the street．The opinions are different．Recently，a class in Shanghai has held a discussion about whether street artists should perform with a license on the street．The opinions are different．
Some students think it quite necessary to obtain a performing license after a series of procedures．With a license，more professional street artists will show off their talents at ease without worrying about being driven away．（高分句型）Besides，the number of pretenders will naturally be reduced so that the social order will tend to be stable．
On the other hand，others hold the opposite view．In their opinion，most street artists perform just to support themselves，so it is unreasonable to be too strict with them．（高分句型） If the government limits them too much，they can't have access to an ordinary life easily．In addition，our life is greatly enriched by the different performances of street artists．
As for me，I am in favor of the regulated performance，as people nowadays have a higher level in appreciation of arts．（高分句型）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息讨论"街头艺人是否要持证上街表演"．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从街头艺人应该经过一定的考核程序持证表演，那么他们的表演会更专业更安心．假冒艺人减少，社会秩序也会更稳定…和街头艺人为了生存而表演，没有必要持证．群众需要各种艺人来丰富业余生活，不应该对他们进行限制…两个方面来讨论该话题并发表自己的观点 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：performing license表演许可证；show off炫耀，展示；Besides另外；On the other hand另一方面；be strict with对…严格；In addition另外；be in favor of 支持

解答 Recently，a class in Shanghai has held a discussion about whether street artists should perform with a license on the street．The opinions are different．
Some students think it quite necessary to obtain a performing license after a series of procedures．With a license，more professional street artists will show off their talents at ease without worrying about being driven away．（高分句型）Besides，the number of pretenders will naturally be reduced so that the social order will tend to be stable．（一些同学的观点）
    On the other hand，others hold the opposite view．In their opinion，most street artists perform just to support themselves，so it is unreasonable to be too strict with them．（高分句型） If the government limits them too much，they can't have access to an ordinary life easily．In addition，our life is greatly enriched by the different performances of street artists．（另一些同学的观点）
   As for me，I am in favor of the regulated performance，as people nowadays have a higher level in appreciation of arts．（高分句型）（作者观点）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．