Question

13．请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章．
Every one of us，rich or poor，should at least have one or two good friends．My friends will listen to me when I want to speak，will wipe my eyes when I cry，will take care of me when I am sick，and my friends will go together with me side by side through this journey of life．
A true friendship carries a long history of experience that determines who we are and keeps us connected．It is a treasure we should protect．Just hanging out together from time to time is not friendship．Friendship means lifelong friends who feel it's very necessary to give each other whatever help that might be required．Unfortunately，the better friends you are，the more probably you'll have disagreements．And the result can be what you don't want-an end to the relationship．The good news is that most troubled friendships can be mended．
【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词概述上文概要；
2．结合上述信息，谈谈你对朋友的看法及朋友对你的影响；
3．根据你的认识，谈谈当朋友之间发生矛盾时该怎么处理．
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题．
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当．
Friendship plays a very important role in our life．It's just like a cup of tea．When we're thirsty，it'll be our best choice．True friendship lasts forever even though sometimes it is troubled．（34 words）
As students，we can share more time with our friends．I often feel very lucky to have a lot of good friends，especially when I have Jim as one of my best friends．We have shared happiness and sorrows with each other since we were classmates at primary school．And we help each other with our study．
What if our friendship is troubled？First，we should never let our pride get in our way．Most of us can forgive each other when differences are brought out in the open．Second，apologize when we're wrong-even if we've been wronged．What's more，see things from our friends'point of view．Last but not least，accept that friendships change as our needs and lifestyles change．（123 words）．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
I often feel very lucky to have a lot of good friends，especially when I have Jim as one of my best friends．我常常觉得有很多的好朋友很幸运，尤其是当我有吉姆是我最好的朋友之一．
高分句型二：
Most of us can forgive each other when differences are brought out in the open．
我们大多数人都能原谅彼此的差异时进行公开道歉．

解答 Friendship plays a very important role in our life．It's just like a cup of tea．When we're thirsty，it'll be our best choice．True friendship lasts forever even though sometimes it is troubled．（34 words）
As students，we can share more time with our friends．I often feel very lucky to have a lot of good friends，especially when I have Jim as one of my best friends（高分句型一）．We have shared happiness and sorrows with each other since we were classmates at primary school．And we help each other with our study．
What if our friendship is troubled？First，we should never let our pride get in our way．Most of us can forgive each other when differences are brought out in the open（高分句型二）．Second，apologize when we're wrong-even if we've been wronged．What's more，see things from our friends'point of view．Last but not least，accept that friendships change as our needs and lifestyles change．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．