Question

【题目】假定你是大庆实验中学的学生李健。最近，学校打算为同学们制作统一的校服，请你给闫校长写一封建议信，要点如下：

1.写信的目的；

2.对校服的布料，款式等提出建议并说明理由。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Yan,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Jian

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Yan,

Knowing that our school will order uniform for us, I am writing to make some suggestions.

Our uniform is worn almost every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like. First of all, I’d prefer it to be made of cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin. Second, it’s tiring to see the same clothes everywhere at school, so please let boys and girls have different uniforms. Third, I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. All students can vote and choose their favorite styles.

I’d be honored if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Jian

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出，写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇英语书信，格式正确，内容齐全，布局合理，运用高级句子。Knowing that our school will order uniform for us, I am writing to make some suggestions.现在分词作时间状语；Our uniform is worn almost every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like.并列句和条件句完美结合；I’d prefer it to be made of cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin.原因状语从句用在句中；I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. suggest作“建议”讲，后面的宾语从句用虚拟语气（should）+动词原形；另外，First of all，Second，Third，I’d be honored if的运用为文章增色添彩。