Question

【题目】假定你是高三学生李华，从网上获悉某国际青少年志愿者组织正在全球招募暑期志愿者。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。主要内容如下：

1.写信目的；

2.自我介绍；

3.希望获准。

注意：1.词数l00左右；

2.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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With all my best regards.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Planning Is Good. But Doing Is Better

Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

【解析】试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语apply for申请；in one’s opinion在某人看来；contribute to有助于；look forward to 盼望着；In my opinion, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but also it can help those in need live better and become more confident.这个句子运用到部分倒装；In the past, I took part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.这个句子运用到in which引导的定语从句；