Question

【题目】假设你是学生会主席李华，你校拟组织美国交换生到孔子庙参观，委托你通知相关事宜, 请你写一则书面通知，要点包括:

1 .集合时间和地点;

2.活动内容:参观孔子庙、古建筑、观看木偶戏；

3.预先准备:简要了解孔子文化。

注意:

1.可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息；

3. 词数:100左右。

参考词汇:1.孔子庙the Confucius Temple 2.木偶戏puppet show

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Answer 1

【答案】Notice

To help you further understand. Chinese-culture, our school will organize a trip to the Confucius Temple. I’d like to share with you some details about it.

As scheduled, we will meet at 7:30 a.m. on Thursday at the school gate, first visit the Confucius Temple, where you can learn much about Confucius and have a deeper understanding of the traditional Chinese culture. Then, we will visit some ancient architecture. After that, we are going to enjoy some puppet shows. You will be greatly impressed with it. Finally, we can taste some special snacks, which are truly delicious. By the way, knowing briefly about the Confucius culture in advance would be quite helpful.

If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me! Looking forward to seeing you.

The Student Union

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生写一则书面通知，通知交换生参观孔子庙的相关事宜。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时

结构：总分

要求：

1. 通知的目的

2. 参观孔子庙的相关事宜

1）集合时间和地点

2）活动内容:参观孔子庙、古建筑、观看木偶戏

3）预先准备:简要了解孔子文化

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

tell sb. sth./ inform sb. of sth./ plan to do sth./ learn about/ set off/ pay a visit to/ date back to/ set up/ in order to/ have a better understanding of/ be impressed with/ in advance

第三步：连词成句

1. In order to help you further understand. Chinese-culture, our school will organize a trip to the Confucius Temple, which dates back to thousands of years ago.

2. I want to share with you some details about it.

3. As planned, we will meet at 7:30 a.m. on Thursday at the school gate.

4. Firstly, we will pay a visit to the Confucius Temple, where you can learn much about Confucius and have a deeper understanding of the traditional Chinese culture.

5. We will visit some ancient architecture, which will leave a deep impression on you.

6. We are going to enjoy some puppet shows.

7. You will be greatly impressed with it.

8. We can taste some special snacks, which are truly delicious.

9. By the way, knowing something about the Confucius culture in advance would be quite helpful.

10. If you have any questions, please contact me!

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）