Question

假定你是李明， 你的朋友Peter 写信向你寻求戒掉网瘾的方法，来帮助他的弟弟，请你在回信中提出你的建议。要点如下：

用引导的方法让他认识到上网成瘾的危害；

向父母或老师求助，帮他限制上网时间并让他浏览既有吸引力又可开阔视野的网站；

引导他说出自己的困惑或烦恼，这样可以找出他对网络游戏依赖的原因。

培养有益身心的爱好来转移注意力。

注意：1. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当进行发挥；

2. 词数：150左右。

Dear Peter,

I feel sorry for your brother’s suffering from the Internet addiction.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Peter,

I feel sorry for your brother’s suffering from the Internet addiction. But don’t be upset. I’ll give you some suggestions.

First, you should communicate with your brother like friends, making him realize the negative effects of the addiction. Second, you can turn to your parents or your brother’s teachers to limit the time spent on the Internet and show the websites that are beneficial and attractive to him. I think in such interaction, he might like to speak out his worries and puzzlement to all of you, which can help you find the reason why he is addicted to computer games. Last but not least, you can help him to develop some healthy interests, such as sending him to some computer training class, going climbing with him to experience the nature, or bringing him to go bungee jumping, which he may like.

I hope such tips can help him get out of the addiction as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】这是一篇书信写作。主要说明怎样帮助Peter的弟弟来戒掉网瘾。材料给出的要点已经给定大致内容，写作时要注意适当增加内容，以保证文章的连贯性和丰富性。文章的第二自然段第一句话First, you should communicate with your brother like friends, making him realize the negative effects of the addiction.使用现在分词短语作状语。I think in such interaction, he might like to speak out his worries and puzzlement to all of you, which can help you find the reason why he is addicted to computer games.使用which引导的非限制性定语从句，还有why引导的定语从句。第二自然段最后一句话Last but not least, you can help him to develop some healthy interests, such as sending him to some computer training class, going climbing with him to experience the nature, or bringing him to go bungee jumping, which he may like.使用which引导的非限制性定语从句。同时在短语的使用上面，feel sorry for，suffer from，give sb suggestions，communicate with，turn to sb ，be addicted to，develop some healthy interests，get out of等动词短语的使用，使得文章的表达更加生动和到位；而Last but not least，such as，as soon as possible等介词短语的使用，使得文章也更加丰富和灵活。文章在表述顺序上使用First，Second，Last but not least使得文章的调理清晰。

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